Poetry - Once Again...
About ten days ago, I posted a love poem I had recently written (here). I mentioned that I used to write a lot of poetry but then some years I had very little or no inspiration. However, recently I have started writing again and today I am here with another love poem. Again I don't think of myself as this huge writer or as if I have all this talent but I do believe I have some talent. And what's more important, I write about what comes to me and about how I feel. These are my pure thoughts and metaphors, some pretty and some not so much. So here is another poetry for you guys. Let me know if you like these poems and if I should continue doing some poetry posts on the blog? I always appreciate your honest but kind constructive criticism and feedback. Thank you, oh so much!
Once Again…
(February 18th AM 2018)
(February 18th AM 2018)
Darkness reminds us that there is always light
and it will light up the fire within you.
Darkness reminds us that the stars always shine,
even if the moon decides to not make an appearance tonight.
Time heals everything and everyone,
even the most painful of souls,
time even surprises us at the end
because we learn to smile again and move on!
Just when we think this is the end,
we are reminded that it is just the beginning,
we may have suffered through a storm or two
but there is a rainbow there through an open door…
Life is never easy and relationships are hard,
we fall down, we break, we shatter our hearts,
we breathe inside the helium of the highest highs
and we cry like babies when we are feeling low…
We shed so many tears and we fall apart,
we forget to see the beauty within us,
we let something or someone build up our walls,
because we want to protect ourselves yet we are alone…
We go entire days and nights without eating or sleeping,
we go through each stage of being broken up,
we cry and we laugh, we suffer and we remember
we remember the good times and the bad…
Then, one day we wake up and feel beautiful again
after a long, restful night of sleep,
a smile curls up our lips all of a sudden,
we rise up, face the sun and get ready to greet the day!
As time moves on and so have you and him,
you are so many steps closer to finding yourselves
you wake up the queen that lies inside each of us,
the queen is there to rule and grab life by its horns!
And just like that we find solace in someone else’s arms,
just like that we find ourselves and perhaps a soulmate,
just like that the pain seems more bearable
and all of a sudden you are ready to fall in love again…
One night you make love again and it feels like the first
time,
you have nothing to lose and everything to gain,
it is your turn not to hide anymore
and to feel loved, appreciated and gorgeous once again!
I can really relate to your poem- so beautiful. Life is like that- you get knocked down over and over and you have to choose to love again. <3 Jamie
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So beautiful Ada, writing what comes to you is what poetry is all about. Such a great form of self expression - thank you for sharing it!
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I'm really not much of a poetry fan, Ada, but this really is a beautiful poem.
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Such a beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteAda, I am smiling ear to ear over this poem...because you are beautiful and I am so glad that you have found your way back to that. Yes, keep writing your poetry, my friend. It is showing us little bits of your soul and that is so magnificent!
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Oh, and I think you will like my post today...The Evolution of Love.
DeleteYou are very talented! It's fun to see you branching out into poetry on your blog!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. There will be more for sure. Prose and essays too.
DeleteAda, you have such a gift. What a lovely poem and I'd love to read more.
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Thanks so much.
DeleteAda, as you predicted, this poem resonates with me! I just love it! It is honest and raw yet hopeful. It is just beautiful, like you! I'd love to read more!
ReplyDeleteI think the newest one I wrote "To Fall in Love" will resonate with you too. So glad you liked it.
DeleteI use to write too. Not poems but short stories. For years my writing has been the blog - and as you can see its short and simple.
ReplyDeleteI have written dozens of short stories too but not in a while. Love when you stop by, Lorena.
DeleteWow Ada. You have a gift with words. I love the arts. I love how we can express our hearts through word, song, paint, etc. We are created, complex beings. Glad you are feeling like the wonderful, beautiful woman you are. :)
ReplyDeleteA gift with words and arts. Words are a form of art too. Thank you for all the kind and wonderful compliments.
DeleteI think your poetry is beautiful and would love to see more! I've started writing poetry again recently as well and it is a hard thing to share it. I've tried to start publishing some of my poetry on my blog, as in one. I believe poetry is an enchanting form of expression.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amanda. I used to write a lot more but I am sort of starting to write again. I definitely believe poetry is a great way of self-expression and I will stop by and read your poetry, too.
DeleteThank you so much Amanda. I used to write a lot more but I am sort of starting to write again. I definitely believe poetry is a great way of self-expression and I will stop by and read your poetry, too.
DeleteLovely poem, and relatable to all who has been relating on the planet. Keep on, poet! #blogcrush xo
ReplyDeleteI think we can all relate to this feeling of being constantly knocked down and then, seemingly from out of nowhere, things turn around and you're on the up.
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Beautiful poem Ada! Thanks for linking up!
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